The matin you sang,
mellow notes merged with my dreams,
and a teardrop smiled
A dream lurks nearby,
waiting for sleep to awake,
weaving a story.
My blog is a composition of endless and wavering thoughts that preoccupies me.This is an attempt to weave the ethereal mind and bring out the lyrics and rhythm in it.
Thank you Sushma ji
ReplyDeletebeautiful lines
ReplyDeletethank you
Delete"And a teardrop smiled" : This is a creatively awesome line. I really liked it.
ReplyDeletethank you for the kind words Neeraj.
DeleteVery Nice...Beautiful
ReplyDeletethank you Abhishek
Deletebeautiful..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kavita ji
DeleteEkti BANGALI mohila'r blog, jaar naam ta Hindi/Hindustani te, kobita kore Ingareji te, aar comment korchhi aami BIHARI!
ReplyDeleteJokes apart..but really touched by the softer and sublime mood of this poem!!
Kobita to ami Hindi, Bangla, English tinte language ei likhi.. Bharotiyo Mohila je... Shujog pele aro shikhtam ebong onyo bhasha teo likhtam. amar blog e ashar jonne dhonyobad.
DeleteGlad that you liked this poem. appreciate the kind words
soo beautiful .....
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ranjana
Deleteबेहद उम्दा - लाजवाब
ReplyDeletebohat bohat shukriya Tushar ji
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